Shedding Regrets at Trinity

My Thoughts on Shedding Regrets at Trinity

"Shedding Regrets at Trinity" promised a thrilling dive into a reimagined Blue Archive universe, and in many ways, it delivered. As a fan of action, fantasy, and a good gender-bending story, I was eager to jump in. The premise of a fanfiction exploring the Eden Treaty arc with an original character, Sora, at the center was immediately appealing.

First Impressions

The initial chapters grabbed my attention with intense action sequences and detailed descriptions of firearms. Sora's portrayal as a powerful and capable protagonist was undeniably fun to read. The world-building felt solid, drawing heavily from the source material while carving its own unique path. However, I soon discovered that the translation quality was a significant hurdle.

What Works Well

The story's strength lies in its reimagining of the Eden Treaty. The author's vision for Sora's impact on the established storyline is compelling. Seeing familiar events unfold with altered outcomes, particularly the integration of the Arius Squad into Trinity, offered a fresh and optimistic perspective. The early "John Wick"-esque action scenes were also a definite highlight, showcasing Sora's prowess and adding an exciting edge to the narrative.

Areas of Concern

Unfortunately, the translation quality significantly detracted from my enjoyment. Inconsistent naming of key locations, awkward phrasing, and potential AI translation errors made it difficult to fully immerse myself in the story. These issues became increasingly apparent as the story progressed, hindering my ability to connect with the characters and events.

Final Verdict

"Shedding Regrets at Trinity" has a lot of potential, with an intriguing storyline and well-developed original character. However, the current translation quality makes it difficult to fully appreciate the story's merits. If you can overlook the translation issues, or perhaps even read the source material directly, you might find this fanfiction to be a worthwhile exploration of the Blue Archive universe. Otherwise, proceed with caution.