Rather Than The Son, I’ll Take The Father

My Thoughts on Rather Than The Son, I’ll Take The Father

"Rather Than The Son, I’ll Take The Father" had me hooked from the intriguing title alone! The premise of a woman reincarnated into a novel, choosing the father over the son to escape a predetermined fate, is undeniably appealing. Overall, I found the story to be entertaining, but it wasn't without its flaws.

First Impressions

The initial chapters are definitely a strong point. I appreciated how the story jumps right into the action, skipping the often tedious setup found in reincarnation stories. The female lead (FL) is presented as confident, clever, and proactive, which is a refreshing change. The FL's personality is definitely a selling point.

What Works Well

Many readers praised the FL's strong character and her determination to change her destiny. I agree that her interactions, especially with the male lead (ML), are often humorous and engaging. The world-building is subtle but effective, and the author reveals background information gradually, which keeps the story moving at a good pace. The dynamic between the FL and ML is genuinely entertaining, with moments of levity. Some readers have even noted how the ML seems completely devoted to the FL, even early on, which adds a layer of charm to their relationship.

Areas of Concern

Despite the strong start, I did find some aspects of the story to be less compelling. Some readers have pointed out that the plot seems to lose direction after a certain point. I can see how the narration can become confusing, jumping between scenes and characters without clear transitions. This can make it difficult to fully immerse oneself in the story. Also, the FL's actions, while initially perceived as clever, can sometimes seem illogical or even childish, which detracts from her overall appeal. A recurring criticism is that the FL's triumphs come too easily, lacking genuine struggle or conflict. This can make the story feel like a power fantasy.

Final Verdict

"Rather Than The Son, I’ll Take The Father" is an enjoyable read, particularly in its early chapters. The strong female lead, intriguing premise, and humorous interactions make it a worthwhile experience. However, the inconsistent narration, plot inconsistencies, and lack of significant conflict prevent it from reaching its full potential. If you're looking for a lighthearted and entertaining story with a confident FL, this might be for you. Just be prepared for some narrative bumps along the way.