Overlooking Your Eyes

My Thoughts on Overlooking Your Eyes

"Overlooking Your Eyes" is a yaoi romance set against the backdrop of school life, a genre I often find myself drawn to. The promise of exploring themes like social status differences and a "love interest falls in love first" trope definitely piqued my interest. While the novel has its moments, it ultimately left me feeling somewhat underwhelmed.

First Impressions

The initial setup is fairly standard: a poor protagonist and a popular love interest. I was hoping for a compelling exploration of their contrasting worlds and the potential for genuine connection amidst those differences. The story starts off reasonably well, introducing the characters and hinting at the underlying tensions and attractions.

What Works Well

The novel does a decent job of establishing the core relationship. There's a certain sweetness to the love interest's affections, and I appreciate the "kind love interest" angle. The exploration of the love interest's internal conflict, the push and pull between his feelings and his actions, was potentially the most interesting aspect of the story. The author attempts to portray a complex dynamic, which is admirable.

Areas of Concern

However, the execution felt a little lacking. The protagonist, while sympathetic in his situation, sometimes came across as somewhat passive. I wanted to see more depth and agency in his character. His quick acceptance of the love interest's affections felt a bit rushed, and I didn't always buy into the depth of his emotional investment.

Final Verdict

Overall, "Overlooking Your Eyes" is a passable read if you're looking for a light yaoi romance. It has some interesting ideas, particularly regarding the love interest's internal struggles, but the execution could be stronger. The characters, while possessing potential, sometimes lack depth and complexity. I'd give it a 3 out of 5 stars. It's not a terrible story, but it didn't quite capture my attention or leave a lasting impression.