Open a Clinic to Cultivate Myself

My Thoughts on Open a Clinic to Cultivate Myself

Alright, let's dive into "Open a Clinic to Cultivate Myself." This novel has a pretty interesting premise – a regular guy gets a chance at power and immortality by running a clinic and using ancient Chinese medicine. It's a cultivation story mixed with a modern setting, and that blend definitely caught my attention.

First Impressions

Initially, I was hooked by the fast-paced plot. The idea of the MC needing to complete a certain number of transactions to avoid negative consequences, like losing years of his life, creates a compelling sense of urgency. The blend of traditional medicine and cultivation also felt fresh.

What Works Well

The initial setup is quite strong. The MC's gradual acquisition of knowledge and power through the "system" (which thankfully isn't an overbearing game-like interface) is well-paced in the beginning. The concept of using a clinic as a front for cultivation is also a clever way to integrate the supernatural into everyday life.

Areas of Concern

However, as the story progresses, some issues started to surface for me. The MC's personality felt inconsistent, bordering on naive and indecisive. His reactions to beautiful women, described as being "stimulated," felt repetitive and immature, especially considering his supposed maturity and cultivation progress.

⚠️ ### Spoiler Warning

(Proceed with caution, spoilers ahead!)

One particular plot point that rubbed me the wrong way was the MC's constant back-and-forth regarding relationships. His initial reluctance to get involved with women due to his longer lifespan and the potential dangers of his cultivation path seemed reasonable. However, his subsequent actions and indecisiveness, especially regarding the snake girl/nurse, felt contradictory and frustrating. The sudden shift towards polygamy also felt forced and undermined the MC's earlier principles.

Another issue was the MC's tendency to get involved in other people's problems, often without a clear reason or benefit. This nosiness, combined with a need to constantly seek help from others, made him feel less like a capable cultivator and more like a pawn in other people's schemes.

Final Verdict

"Open a Clinic to Cultivate Myself" has a promising start with a unique blend of cultivation and modern medicine. However, inconsistent character development and frustrating plot choices ultimately detract from the overall experience. While the initial concept is intriguing, the execution falls short of its potential.