Level up Inquisitor

My Thoughts on Level up Inquisitor

"Level up Inquisitor" caught my eye with its blend of fantasy, sci-fi, and game elements. The premise of a VR game where a player embodies an Inquisitor, burning heretics to level up, definitely piqued my curiosity. However, after delving into the available chapters and considering other readers' experiences, I have mixed feelings.

First Impressions

Initially, the concept of the main character's unique class and its implications for the game world were intriguing. The idea that his actions, driven by his Inquisitor role, would shape the narrative and how other players perceive him held promise. The goddess connection, and the requirements to earn her favor, also seemed like a compelling mechanic.

What Works Well

The world-building within the game seems competently done. The leveling system, the mysteries surrounding the game's true nature, and the unique class that "shouldn't exist" all contribute to a sense of intrigue. Some readers appreciated the detailed explanations of game mechanics, finding them immersive. The PVP aspect, with the Inquisitor's unique methods of subduing enemies, also adds a layer of excitement and moral ambiguity. I can see how the early setup, while perhaps slow-paced for some, lays the groundwork for more complex developments later on.

Areas of Concern

One recurring concern is the pacing. The initial chapters seem to lack significant conflict, and the main plot takes a while to develop. This slow burn might deter some readers looking for immediate action. Also, some readers felt the MC's early advantages, like his pre-existing game knowledge and "unique" constitution, felt somewhat contrived. Others noted that the initial focus on the Inquisitor's class and its moral implications seems to fade as standard leveling and questing take precedence. The balance between the unique class mechanics and the more generic MMORPG elements appears to be a point of contention.

Final Verdict

"Level up Inquisitor" presents an interesting concept with a unique class at its core. However, the pacing issues and the perceived imbalance between the Inquisitor's special abilities and typical MMORPG gameplay might not appeal to all readers. While the world-building and the unfolding mysteries are promising, the initial chapters could benefit from more immediate conflict and a stronger focus on the unique aspects of the MC's class. It's a novel with potential, but whether it lives up to that potential depends on the reader's patience and tolerance for a slow-burn narrative. I'd say it's worth a try if you enjoy VRMMORPGs with a darker twist, but be prepared for a potentially slow start.