I’ve Been Possessed, But What If I Get Pregnant First?

My Thoughts on I’ve Been Possessed, But What If I Get Pregnant First?

"I’ve Been Possessed, But What If I Get Pregnant First?" is a completed original web novel that I recently dove into, and it's been quite the rollercoaster. The premise, blending drama, fantasy, and yaoi with a hefty dose of amnesia and mpreg, certainly grabbed my attention. But, like any story, it has its strengths and weaknesses that I want to discuss.

First Impressions

Initially, I was drawn in by the potential fluff and the dynamic between the gangster ML and the seemingly naive MC. The idea of a possessive ML holding back for the sake of their relationship was intriguing, and I was eager to see how their connection would develop, especially with the added complication of a potential pregnancy.

What Works Well

Despite some criticisms, there's a certain charm to the novel. I appreciated the author's attempt to create a compelling narrative with high stakes and emotional depth. The initial premise of a 'fish out of water' MC navigating a new reality is always appealing, and the potential for fluffy moments amidst the heavier themes kept me reading.

Areas of Concern

However, I can't ignore some of the concerns raised. The MC's tendency to run away from problems, while perhaps stemming from trauma, can become repetitive and frustrating. It often felt like the ML was constantly rescuing the MC, leading to a "damsel in distress" dynamic that wore thin. I also felt the characters could use more depth and complexity. Their motivations sometimes felt shallow, and the emotional impact of certain events didn't quite land as powerfully as I'd hoped.

Final Verdict

Overall, "I’ve Been Possessed, But What If I Get Pregnant First?" is a mixed bag. It has moments of sweetness and intrigue, but the repetitive plot points and somewhat shallow character development ultimately hold it back. It's a decent read if you're looking for something with a dramatic plot and some fluffy moments, but be prepared for some frustration along the way. I'd give it a 3 out of 5 stars.