Is It Strange For A Succubus To Be Wearing Clothes?

My Thoughts on Is It Strange For A Succubus To Be Wearing Clothes?

This web novel definitely grabbed my attention with its quirky title and intriguing premise. A succubus who prefers clothes? In a post-apocalyptic world with gates and hunters? I was in! After diving in, here's what I think.

First Impressions

Initially, I thought I was in for a lighthearted, overpowered protagonist story. While the narration has a comedic touch, I quickly realized that the world our succubus, is anything but light. It's a dark, gritty place teetering on the edge of collapse, where corruption and misery seem to be the norm. The "succubus" label also feels inadequate; she comes across as something far more ancient and alien, struggling to emulate humanity, and I found that aspect of the story particularly compelling.

What Works Well

The world-building is a standout. The author paints a vivid picture of a civilization constantly threatened by otherworldly entities and evil spirits. I particularly enjoyed the author's portrayal of the protagonist's eldritch nature. She's narcissistic and detached, yet possesses a sliver of humanity that compels her to do good, even if unintentionally. The dynamic between her immense power and her attempts to navigate human society provides many interesting moments. The author does a great job of making her seem "other."

Areas of Concern

Despite the strong world-building and interesting character, the writing style did become a bit of a sticking point for me. The flowery, descriptive language, while initially atmospheric, sometimes felt excessive and slowed down the pacing. I found myself skimming through sections, particularly the internet dialogue, which, while initially amusing, became repetitive with its constant praise of the MC's beauty. Also, while tagged as yuri, the romantic elements felt underdeveloped.

Final Verdict

"Is It Strange For A Succubus To Be Wearing Clothes?" is a unique and engaging read with a fascinating protagonist and a well-developed world. While the pacing and writing style may not appeal to all readers, the intriguing premise and the exploration of the MC's alien nature make it worth checking out. I'm eager to see where the story goes, and I'm hoping the author will address some of the pacing issues as the narrative progresses.