I Will Steal My Friend’s Fiancé!

My Thoughts on I Will Steal My Friend’s Fiancé!

"I Will Steal My Friend’s Fiancé!" promises a tale of revenge, betrayal, and second chances, a combination that always piques my interest. The premise is fairly standard for the genre: our female lead, Rose, gets utterly screwed over by a close friend and experiences a devastating fall from grace. Fortunately, she gets a do-over, and naturally, payback is on her mind.

First Impressions

The opening chapters definitely threw me for a loop initially. It felt a bit disjointed, and I struggled to get a clear picture of Rose's life and the circumstances surrounding her downfall. It took a little patience to get my bearings, but I'm glad I stuck with it because the narrative does improve significantly after the initial rough patch.

What Works Well

What immediately grabbed me was Rose's attitude. She's not your typical dainty, passive revenge-seeker. There's a raw, almost feral edge to her, likely stemming from the hardships she endured after her initial downfall. Her willingness to get her hands dirty and employ less-than-noble tactics is a refreshing change of pace. I found myself rooting for her to unleash her fury on those who wronged her. I also appreciate that the narrative seems to extend beyond just the "friend" who betrayed her, it seems like Rose is also coming to terms with the failures of her parents as well.

Final Verdict

"I Will Steal My Friend’s Fiancé!" has the potential to be a truly captivating revenge story, especially if it continues to embrace its morally grey protagonist and avoids falling into predictable romance tropes. While the initial chapters could use some polish, the story's unique blend of grit and determination has definitely hooked me. I'm cautiously optimistic and eager to see where Rose's quest for vengeance takes her.