I Took Over The Demonic Ancestor

My Thoughts on I Took Over The Demonic Ancestor

Alright, let's dive into "I Took Over The Demonic Ancestor." This novel had an interesting premise, but my experience, and it seems like the experience of others, was a bit of a mixed bag. I went in hoping for a dark and compelling tale of a villain turned (sort of) hero, but what I found was... well, complicated.

First Impressions

The initial chapters definitely threw me for a loop. The setup is that the MC inherits the body of a demonic ancestor, but almost immediately starts thinking about being righteous. This kind of immediate shift can be jarring, and I can see why some readers might find it disappointing, especially if they were expecting a truly evil protagonist.

What Works Well

It's tough to pinpoint major positives, to be frank. The core concept does have potential. A demonic ancestor grappling with newfound morality could be a goldmine for character development and internal conflict. There are also hints of a system mechanic, which, when done well, can add layers of progression and intrigue. I also appreciate the attempts at comedy woven into the narrative; a little levity can go a long way.

Areas of Concern

My main issue, and one I saw echoed by other readers, is the MC's decision-making. He comes across as somewhat… lacking in the strategic thinking department. For someone who inherited the memories and power of a demonic ancestor, he makes some baffling choices. For example, wasting resources or not fully utilizing his abilities seemed like a missed opportunity to showcase his supposed power and intelligence. This, unfortunately, led to a feeling that the MC was a bit "braindead," as one reader put it. The damsel-in-distress scenarios also felt rushed and cliché, detracting from the story's originality.

Final Verdict

"I Took Over The Demonic Ancestor" is a novel with a promising premise that, in my opinion, doesn't quite live up to its potential. The MC's inconsistent actions, the rushed plot points, and the reliance on tropes weigh it down. While there are glimpses of humor and a potentially interesting system, the overall execution leaves much to be desired. For me, it's a 2/5. Maybe with significant revisions and a clearer direction for the MC, it could improve, but as it stands, it needs work.