I Raised Him Modestly, But He Came Back Obsessed With Me

My Thoughts on I Raised Him Modestly, But He Came Back Obsessed With Me

"I Raised Him Modestly, But He Came Back Obsessed With Me" is a completed web novel that I found to be a mixed bag. It has definite charm and appeal, especially for those who enjoy a doting male lead, but it also has some flaws that kept me from truly falling in love with it. The premise is intriguing: a strong female lead raising an abandoned child who returns with intense feelings. However, the execution wasn't always perfect.

First Impressions

Initially, I was drawn in by the promise of a unique dynamic between the female lead (FL) and the male lead (ML). The early chapters have a certain allure, establishing Cersenia as a capable woman and hinting at the ML's future obsession. The translation quality is also a definite plus, making the reading experience smooth and enjoyable. I was excited to see how their relationship would develop over time, especially considering the age gap and the ML's difficult past.

What Works Well

The ML's devotion is a major highlight. If you're a sucker for a love interest who is utterly smitten and willing to do anything for the FL, this novel delivers. Many readers seem to agree that the ML's character, despite being somewhat one-dimensional, is undeniably endearing. The FL's strength and independence are also appealing, and I appreciated that she wasn't a damsel in distress. The friendships she forms, particularly with characters like May, add a nice touch and create a sense of camaraderie.

Areas of Concern

However, I did find some aspects of the story frustrating. The FL's constant denial of her feelings for the ML felt dragged out and, at times, contrived. This internal conflict created unnecessary angst and hindered the progression of their relationship. The quickness in which the leads fell for each other did feel a little rushed and unnatural. Moreover, I found myself wishing for more depth in the ML's character beyond his obsession with the FL. Exploring his background and motivations more thoroughly could have made him a more compelling character.

Final Verdict

Overall, "I Raised Him Modestly, But He Came Back Obsessed With Me" is a decent read, especially if you're looking for a fluffy romance with a devoted male lead. While it suffers from some pacing issues, contrived angst, and a lack of depth in certain areas, the strong female lead and the well-executed translation make it an enjoyable way to pass the time. I'd give it a solid 3.5 out of 5 stars.