I Made a Game Featuring Constellations

My Thoughts on I Made a Game Featuring Constellations

"I Made a Game Featuring Constellations" had a premise that immediately grabbed my attention: a protagonist transported to another world who then creates a VR gacha game with the help of constellations. The blend of fantasy, VR, and mythology sounded like a recipe for a captivating story. However, my experience with the novel has been a bit of a mixed bag.

First Impressions

Initially, I was intrigued by the concept, particularly the idea of constellations influencing a VR game. The setup promised a unique take on the isekai genre, with the potential for interesting character dynamics and world-building. I was eager to see how the protagonist would navigate this new world and develop his game.

What Works Well

The core concept is undeniably appealing. The idea of a "bored genius" teaming up with a constellation to create a VR game that surpasses anything in their world is exciting. I found myself drawn to the potential of the game's concept, where players fix corrupted historical timelines. This element reminded me of popular franchises like Dragon Ball Xenoverse and Fate/Grand Order, adding a layer of nostalgia to the experience. Also, the author's world of Isekai is a fun and captivating place to set the VR game.

Areas of Concern

Unfortunately, the execution feels somewhat lacking. The initial chapters felt rushed, with key plot points and character introductions glossed over. The mechanisms of transportation to this world, and the protagonist's survival, along with the lack of explanation for the constellation partnership felt vague and unsatisfying. The pacing is erratic, and I found myself struggling to connect with the characters due to the superficial development. The lack of explanation on how the gacha was made, combined with the lack of struggle from the constellations feels like lazy storytelling.

Final Verdict

"I Made a Game Featuring Constellations" has an intriguing premise and some exciting elements, but it ultimately falls short in its execution. The lack of explanation, erratic pacing, and superficial character development make it difficult to fully invest in the story. While the core concept is appealing, the novel needs more polish and attention to detail to truly shine. I'm hoping the author will address these issues in future updates, as the potential for a truly captivating story is definitely there.