I Became the Main Character’s Demon Sword

My Thoughts on I Became the Main Character’s Demon Sword

"I Became the Main Character’s Demon Sword" has been an interesting read so far, though not without its quirks. The premise itself is intriguing, and while the execution has some stumbles, there's enough here to keep me invested, at least for now.

First Impressions

The initial chapters hooked me with the dynamic between the MC, a powerful demon sword, and the ML, a child blessed by the gods. There's a definite "aristocratic vibe" to the MC, and his calm, apathetic demeanor, juxtaposed with his caring nature towards the ML, creates a compelling character. The early plot, focused on reaching the temple to reveal the ML's divine blessing, felt like a solid starting point.

What Works Well

I really enjoy the MC's character. The power dynamic is well-established, and the author does a good job of showing how the MC's past as a human influences his actions and inner conflicts. The pacing is generally smooth, with well-placed time skips that keep the story moving without feeling rushed. I also appreciate that the world-building doesn't immediately demonize demonic power, allowing for a more nuanced exploration of the setting.

Areas of Concern

One of my biggest issues is the MC's quick shift from being a sword to spending most of his time in human form. The premise, while interesting, feels somewhat abandoned. It feels like the author could have had the MC be something other than a sword if he was just going to be in human form almost all the time. Additionally, the focus on the MC and ML's relationship can sometimes overshadow the main plot, leading to pacing issues later on. The shift in focus from character interaction to the main plot felt a little disjointed, making the story feel awkward. Also, the worldbuilding can feel a little lacking, with some inconsistencies that pull me out of the story.

Final Verdict

Overall, "I Became the Main Character's Demon Sword" is a decent read with a unique premise and compelling characters. However, it suffers from some execution issues, particularly in its worldbuilding and pacing. If you're looking for a Boys Love with a unique dynamic and don't mind some inconsistencies, this might be worth checking out.