I Became A Third-Rate Villain In The Hero Academy

My Thoughts on I Became A Third-Rate Villain In The Hero Academy

"I Became A Third-Rate Villain In The Hero Academy" has been quite the experience, and I'm honestly a bit torn on how I feel about it. It's a novel with some genuinely interesting ideas that, unfortunately, seem to get bogged down by familiar tropes and inconsistencies. While I found myself invested in certain aspects, other elements left me scratching my head.

First Impressions

The premise is definitely intriguing: a protagonist transmigrating into the body of a villain in a hero academy. The initial chapters hooked me, and I was eager to see how the MC would navigate the treacherous waters of avoiding death flags while trying to become stronger. The world-building is decent, mixing medieval fantasy with a meritocratic academy setting.

What Works Well

I appreciate that the MC isn't immediately overpowered. He actually has to train and work for his strength, which is a refreshing change from the instant-OP isekai stories we often see. I also found the "Dignity of a Twisted Aristocrat" trait to be a compelling constraint, forcing the MC to act in ways that aren't always in line with his new, more benevolent intentions. It adds a layer of complexity to his character. Some of the side characters, particularly the fiancée Irene, are well-written and have depth. I also enjoyed the action-filled scenes and the unique power system, but at times it feels generic.

Areas of Concern

My main issue lies with the harem elements and the somewhat inconsistent character development. While I understand harem is a core genre, the execution feels forced and unearned at times. The female characters often fall for the MC too easily, with little meaningful interaction or development. The MC's denseness regarding their affections can also be frustrating. I also noticed a bit of a disconnect in the MC's abilities. He's supposedly below average, yet admitted into an elite program. The system, while interesting, also has some glaring issues. The coin-based shop is terribly explained and implemented. Some plot points feel contrived, and the MC's reactions to certain situations can be overblown and inconsistent with his established personality.

Final Verdict

"I Became A Third-Rate Villain In The Hero Academy" is a mixed bag. It has moments of brilliance and genuine entertainment, but it's also plagued by inconsistencies, forced tropes, and a harem that often feels more like a liability than an asset. If you're a die-hard harem fan and can overlook some of the flaws, you might find enjoyment here. However, if you're looking for a tightly written story with consistent character development and meaningful relationships, you might want to proceed with caution. I give it a tentative 3/5.