I Became a Childhood Friend of the Middle Boss

My Thoughts on I Became a Childhood Friend of the Middle Boss

Alright, let's dive into "I Became a Childhood Friend of the Middle Boss." The premise alone – befriending a future villain instead of battling them – immediately grabbed my attention. It's a fun twist on the typical villain-centric narrative, and I was eager to see how the author would execute it.

First Impressions

Initially, I was hooked. The concept is solid, and the characters seemed promising. The backstory had a logic that drew me in, setting the stage for what could be an engaging story. It's easy to see why the manhwa adaptation drew readers in.

What Works Well

The main character is quite interesting. His outside knowledge, while a common trope, does provide a unique lens through which he navigates the world. He's got this constant need to set things up for the future, which, while sometimes detrimental, also shows a certain level of care and foresight. The female lead, a bunny girl, is also a strong point. She's outrageously overpowered, but her actions have a certain logic to them, avoiding any glaring flaws. The world itself, a controlled invasion gate scenario, is also somewhat intriguing.

Areas of Concern

Unfortunately, there are some significant issues that hold this novel back, primarily concerning the translation quality. It's borderline unreadable at times, resembling machine translation with minimal proofreading. This can make it incredibly difficult to follow the plot, especially if you're not already familiar with the story from the manhwa. The awkward phrasing and grammatical errors often force you to act as your own proofreader, which can become quite tiresome.

I also found myself questioning the academy setting, a common trope in these types of stories. In a world where powerful hunter families already exist, the purpose of the academy feels somewhat redundant. It would be more compelling to see a system of apprenticeship and mentorship within these established families. Furthermore, the treatment of the bunny people felt strange. If they are inherently talented, why are they ostracized instead of being valuable assets to the hunter families?

Final Verdict

While "I Became a Childhood Friend of the Middle Boss" has a captivating premise and some interesting characters, the poor translation significantly hinders the reading experience. If you're willing to slog through the grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, you might find some enjoyment in the story. However, until the translation quality improves, it's difficult to fully recommend this novel. I'm hoping a skilled translator picks this up, because the underlying story has real potential.