Due to My Incompetence, I Was Abandoned

My Thoughts on Due to My Incompetence, I Was Abandoned

This web novel grabbed my attention with its intriguing premise and dark themes. "Due to My Incompetence, I Was Abandoned" paints a picture of a child born into extraordinary circumstances, only to be deemed lacking and subsequently abandoned. It’s a compelling setup, and I was eager to see how the story would unfold.

First Impressions

The initial chapters immediately establish a sense of unease and injustice. We're introduced to the protagonist, the child of a hero and a saint, burdened by the weight of expectations he can't meet. The narrative quickly spirals into a tale of despair and eventual revenge, which definitely hooked me.

What Works Well

The exploration of complex family dynamics is a major strength. The strained relationship between the protagonist and his parents, fueled by his perceived inadequacy, feels believable and heartbreaking. The slow descent into darkness as the protagonist loses hope is portrayed effectively, making his eventual desire for revenge understandable, if not entirely justifiable. I particularly appreciated the novel's willingness to delve into morally grey areas. It doesn't shy away from depicting the protagonist's growing coldness and his willingness to punish those who wronged him, regardless of the cost.

Areas of Concern

While the premise is strong, I do worry about the pacing and whether the author can successfully navigate the protagonist's transformation into a vengeful figure. Also, the novel is currently ongoing, so I can't speak to the overall resolution of the plot, which is always a risk when starting an incomplete story.

Final Verdict

Despite my concerns and the fact that it's still ongoing, I'd recommend giving "Due to My Incompetence, I Was Abandoned" a try if you're a fan of dark fantasy with a morally complex protagonist. The exploration of abandonment, despair, and the thirst for revenge is compelling, and I'm eager to see where the story goes. Just be prepared for a potentially emotionally taxing journey.