[TS/LoL] Cross-Eyed Ma-Mang

My Thoughts on [TS/LoL] Cross-Eyed Ma-Mang

This web novel is quite the ride, a wild blend of genres and concepts that both intrigued and occasionally bewildered me. The premise alone is enough to grab anyone's attention: a man reincarnated as the pregnant mother of Sett in the League of Legends universe. It's a bold starting point, and the story definitely leans into the absurdity of it all.

First Impressions

Initially, I was hooked by the sheer novelty of the idea. The main character's devotion to his own mother in his past life, and his subsequent desire to emulate her maternal qualities, adds a layer of heart to what could have easily been a purely comedic romp. The early chapters set up a promising dynamic: a protagonist grappling with their new reality while striving to raise their son in a loving and supportive environment. I found myself eager to see how the author would navigate this unusual setup.

What Works Well

The story shines when it focuses on the core relationship between the protagonist and Sett. The humor is often on point, and the protagonist's fish-out-of-water perspective provides plenty of opportunities for comedic misunderstandings and awkward situations. I appreciated the effort to flesh out the world and introduce other League of Legends champions, creating a prequel-esque narrative. For readers familiar with the LoL universe, this adds an extra layer of enjoyment, although the story remains accessible even without prior knowledge. The idea of Sett's mother being secretly overpowered also adds to the fun.

Areas of Concern

As the story progresses, it seems to lose some of its focus. The introduction of elements from other universes and references to various anime and novels feels somewhat haphazard and detracts from the initial premise. While these additions might appeal to some readers, they can also create a sense of disjointedness and make it harder to stay invested in the core narrative. I also felt that the initial charm of the protagonist's naivete began to wear thin as the story continued.

Final Verdict

[TS/LoL] Cross-Eyed Ma-Mang is a unique and entertaining web novel with a strong initial concept and a good dose of humor. However, its tendency to veer off into tangential plotlines and incorporate disparate elements from other universes can detract from the overall experience. If you're looking for a lighthearted and unconventional story with a gender-bent protagonist in the League of Legends universe, this might be worth checking out. Just be prepared for a potentially bumpy ride.