Saved the Protagonist’s Teacher

My Thoughts on Saved the Protagonist’s Teacher

First Impressions

"Saved the Protagonist's Teacher" had an interesting premise that immediately caught my attention. A reincarnated gamer, determined to save his favorite side character from a tragic fate? Sign me up! The idea of a demon, Kesar, fighting against his own side to protect Mari, the protagonist's teacher, felt like a compelling twist on the typical isekai formula. I was eager to dive into this world of fantasy, demons, and second chances.

What Works Well

The initial setup and Kesar's motivations are definitely the strongest aspects of the story. I appreciated the focus on Mari, who, despite being a side character in the original game, takes center stage here. The dynamic between Kesar and Mari is intriguing, especially with Kesar's initial belief that her alliance with him is a ruse. This creates a layer of tension and uncertainty that kept me invested. The pacing, while quick, didn't feel overly rushed, allowing the story to progress at a reasonable clip. I also liked the premise of a protagonist who cares and the premise of elemental magic.

Areas of Concern

While the story had potential, I felt that the execution fell short in several areas. Mari's character, despite being a central figure, lacked depth. Her motivations and inner thoughts weren't explored enough, leaving her feeling somewhat underdeveloped. The story also felt "compressed," lacking the elaborate world-building and character development that would have made it truly shine. This is a shame, because the premise of a teacher and the betrayal of her disciples could have been interesting.

Final Verdict

"Saved the Protagonist's Teacher" is a novel with a promising premise that unfortunately doesn't quite live up to its potential. While the initial setup and the dynamic between Kesar and Mari are intriguing, the lack of character depth and underdeveloped world-building ultimately hold it back. I think it's worth a try if you're looking for a quick and light read.