I Became the Empress’s Personal Guard Novel Review

My Thoughts on I Became the Empress’s Personal Guard

"I Became the Empress’s Personal Guard" promised a blend of action, fantasy, romance, and even a touch of the supernatural, and after diving in, I can see why it's garnered a dedicated readership. However, like any story, it has its strengths and weaknesses.

First Impressions

The initial premise is intriguing, and I was immediately drawn in by the dynamic between the main character and the empress. The promise of political intrigue and supernatural elements certainly piqued my interest, and I was eager to see how the story would unfold.

What Works Well

The banter between the MC and FL is definitely a highlight. It feels fresh and adds a layer of levity to what could otherwise be a very serious story. The characters, in general, seem well-developed, each with their own backstories and motivations, which makes them feel more real and relatable. The pacing, for the most part, feels consistent, which keeps the story moving forward without feeling rushed, although some readers might disagree with that.

Areas of Concern

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While the overall plot is engaging, I did notice some potential issues with the pacing and resolution of certain arcs. For example, the assassination mission arc felt a bit too easily resolved. The negotiation with the king seemed rushed, and the outcome felt somewhat contrived. This kind of convenient resolution can detract from the overall tension and impact of the story.

The "yandere" tag also seems a bit misleading, at least in the early chapters. The main heroine's yandere tendencies are fairly mild, and there's not much competition for the MC's affections, which diminishes the intensity of that aspect of the story. The other girls around MC are quick to back down, which may disappoint readers hoping for a more intense yandere experience.

Final Verdict

Overall, "I Became the Empress’s Personal Guard" is an enjoyable read, particularly if you're a fan of lighthearted banter and well-developed characters. However, the pacing issues and somewhat underwhelming yandere elements might be a drawback for some readers. I'd recommend giving it a try, but be aware that the story might not fully deliver on all of its promises.