Because It will Never get Dirty

My Thoughts on Because It will Never get Dirty

Okay, so I dove into "Because It will Never get Dirty" with a healthy dose of curiosity and a raised eyebrow, and I have some thoughts. The premise is definitely... something. A gender-bender, harem, yuri novel set in an alternate world where only women exist and can, uh, kiss each other into pregnancy? Yeah, it's a wild ride from the get-go.

First Impressions

My initial reaction mirrored what I suspect many readers feel: intrigued, but cautious. The opening chapters throw you headfirst into this bizarre world, and it takes a moment to get your bearings. The main character's attempts to hide her beauty with "beauty seals" – think oversized glasses and messy hair – are a familiar trope, but I'm willing to see where it goes. The world itself feels chaotic and a little dangerous, which definitely piqued my interest.

What Works Well

The sheer audacity of the concept is probably the biggest draw here. If you're looking for something different, something that throws all conventional expectations out the window, this might be your cup of tea. The yandere elements are definitely present, and if that's your jam, you'll likely find plenty to enjoy. I also appreciate the potential for exploring themes of identity and societal norms within such an unusual framework.

Areas of Concern

Okay, let's address the elephant in the room: the translation. It's rough around the edges. I noticed some awkward phrasing and pronoun mix-ups that can definitely pull you out of the story. It's a shame because a smoother translation would really elevate the reading experience. It's also worth noting that the world-building, while unique, could use some more fleshing out. Why are things the way they are? What's the history behind this monosexual society? I'm hoping these questions will be answered as the story progresses.

Final Verdict

"Because It will Never get Dirty" is a bit of a gamble. It's weird, it's potentially problematic, and the translation needs work. But there's also something undeniably captivating about its sheer strangeness. If you're a fan of yuri, gender-bending stories with a dark twist, and you're willing to overlook some imperfections, this might be worth a try. Just go in with your eyes open and prepare for a bumpy, but potentially rewarding, ride. I'm giving it a tentative thumbs-up, with the caveat that the translation needs some serious love.