An Exclusive Mage Who Broke up With His Alchemist Childhood Friend, Wants to Lead a Slow Life in a Remote Town
By kitsune gozen, 狐御前
291 chapters
2022
Description
Ruby, a genius but arrogant alchemist, power harassed her childhood friend Loyd and exclusive mage on a daily basis. Loyd’s picking rate was forty percent, far lower than other mages, making him a laughingstock throughout the country. Incompetent exclusive, hanger-on, worthless other than being Ruby’s childhood friend. That was how the world tended to see Loyd. But Loyd was sick of the power harassment from his childhood friend and bashing from the rest of the world, and broke up with her, deciding to instead lead a slow life in a remote region where no one knew him. But there was something no one, not even himself realized. Since all the materials Ruby casually requested were all S rare rank, other mages would be unable to gather a single one of them.
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Publication Information
- Original Publisher
- kadokawa
- Original Language
- japanese
- Type
- Web Novel
An Exclusive Mage Who Broke up With His Alchemist Childhood Friend, Wants to Lead a Slow Life in a Remote Town Review & Spoilers - Novel Translator
My Thoughts on An Exclusive Mage Who Broke up With His Alchemist Childhood Friend, Wants to Lead a Slow Life in a Remote Town
This title is a mouthful, but the premise definitely piqued my interest: a mage escaping a toxic relationship to pursue a peaceful life. After diving in, I found the story a mixed bag, with some enjoyable elements overshadowed by frustrating tropes and inconsistencies.
First Impressions
The initial chapters hooked me with the promise of a fresh start for Lloyd, our protagonist. The breakup with his childhood friend, Ruby, an alchemist, sets the stage for his journey of self-discovery in a remote town. I was intrigued to see how he'd navigate his newfound freedom and whether he'd truly find the slow life he craved.
What Works Well
The core concept of an underappreciated mage finally getting his due is appealing. The slice-of-life aspects, showcasing Lloyd's interactions with the townspeople and his gradual integration into their community, were generally well-executed. There's a certain charm in watching him use his hidden talents to help others, offering a glimpse of the fulfilling life he was denied before.
Areas of Concern
However, the execution falters in some key areas. I found myself struggling with the logic behind everyone's obliviousness to Lloyd's immense power. The story contrives reasons for his abilities to be overlooked, which stretches believability and becomes irritating. The narrative sometimes sacrifices common sense for the sake of plot convenience, undermining the overall immersion.
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Final Verdict
"An Exclusive Mage Who Broke up With His Alchemist Childhood Friend, Wants to Lead a Slow Life in a Remote Town" has a compelling premise and moments of genuine enjoyment. However, logical inconsistencies and the somewhat disjointed narrative prevent it from reaching its full potential. If you're willing to overlook these flaws, you might find it a decent read, but it's not a standout in the genre. I'd recommend approaching it with tempered expectations.
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