My Brother, Who’s a Perfect Human Being, Has Stolen My Girlfriend and My Future, so I Went Back to the Past and Redo My Youth

My Thoughts on My Brother, Who’s a Perfect Human Being, Has Stolen My Girlfriend and My Future, so I Went Back to the Past and Redo My Youth

This title certainly grabs your attention, doesn't it? The premise – a betrayed man gets a second chance to rewrite his life – is undeniably appealing. However, after diving in, I found myself wrestling with some serious issues that ultimately dampened my enjoyment.

First Impressions

Initially, I was intrigued. The setup is classic revenge fare: a protagonist wronged by his seemingly perfect brother and unfaithful girlfriend. The time travel element adds a layer of complexity that I was eager to explore. But, as the story progressed, my excitement waned.

What Works Well

Honestly, finding positives was a struggle. The initial concept held promise, and I can see how some readers might be drawn to the wish-fulfillment aspect of a second chance. The potential for character growth is there, buried beneath layers of frustration.

Areas of Concern

My biggest issue lies with the protagonist, Kouki. His obsession with "winning" against his brother and parents feels childish and poorly executed. Instead of focusing on building a better future for himself, he's consumed by a need for their validation, a validation they seem unlikely to ever provide. This makes his actions feel aimless and, at times, downright illogical.

The pacing is also a major problem. The tension between Kouki and his brother dissipates far too early, only to be resurrected with a plot twist that feels forced and uninspired. This inconsistent pacing undermines the story's momentum and makes it difficult to stay invested.

Finally, the time travel mechanics feel arbitrary and poorly defined. The rules seem to change on a whim, leading to inconsistencies that undermine the story's internal logic.

Final Verdict

Ultimately, My Brother, Who’s a Perfect Human Being… is a disappointing read. While the premise is intriguing, the execution falls short. The frustrating protagonist, inconsistent pacing, and poorly defined time travel mechanics make it difficult to recommend. I’d suggest approaching this one with caution.