I Thought I Picked up a Girl Who Had Fallen Down, but It Turned Out To Be the Future Demon Lord Novel Review

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By graphite, kokuen, 黒鉛

3.8

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CompletedjapaneseWeb Novel

Genres

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adventure comedy fantasy romance shounen

Chapters

30 chapters

Started

2019

Description

It’s been 25 years since I found myself reincarnated in another world. I’m a traveler by profession, otherwise known as unemployed. While I was wandering around, trying to enjoy fantasy from top to bottom, I encountered an injured dragon girl. As she looked at me, the image of the Demon Lord from the smartphone game I had played in my previous life came back to my mind. She is a powerful opponent who is a great enemy of humankind, a brave man pulls out his sword and confronts the demon lord to get rid of it. …But. In front of me, there is a girl whose clan was destroyed by humans and struggled to survive even if it became tattered. At this rate, her destination is the two characters of ruin.

Publication Information

Original Publisher: kakuyomu
Original Language: japanese
Type: Web Novel

I Thought I Picked up a Girl Who Had Fallen Down, but It Turned Out To Be the Future Demon Lord Review & Spoilers - Novel Translator

My Thoughts on I Thought I Picked up a Girl Who Had Fallen Down, but It Turned Out To Be the Future Demon Lord

"I Thought I Picked up a Girl Who Had Fallen Down, but It Turned Out To Be the Future Demon Lord" certainly has a catchy title, and after diving in, I can see why it's garnered some attention. It's a light, fluffy read with a cute premise, but it definitely has its shortcomings.

First Impressions

The initial chapters are promising, setting up a classic "caring protagonist meets damsel in distress" scenario with a twist. The idea of the protagonist stumbling upon the future Demon Lord is intriguing, and the early interactions are sweet. It definitely hooks you in with its potential for a heartwarming story.

What Works Well

The core strength of this novel lies in its cuteness and warmth. It's like a cup of lukewarm tea with honey, as one reader aptly put it. The relationship between the protagonist and Spica, the future Demon Lord, is the driving force, and when the story focuses on their growing bond, it shines. I particularly enjoyed the hints of a larger world with RPG-esque elements, even though they weren't fully explored. The author does a decent job of hinting at a deeper world without getting bogged down in exposition.

Areas of Concern

Unfortunately, the novel suffers from being too short. At only 30 chapters, the story feels rushed and underdeveloped. I agree with many readers that the pacing is off, especially when it comes to Spica's tragic backstory. The transition from trauma to romance feels abrupt and unconvincing. I also found Sun, the male protagonist, to be a bit bland. He's a kind-hearted character, but he lacks depth and could easily be replaced by any generic JP protagonist. Several readers also pointed out the translation quality could be improved, as it sometimes lacks smoothness.

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Final Verdict

"I Thought I Picked up a Girl Who Had Fallen Down, but It Turned Out To Be the Future Demon Lord" is a decent, fluffy read if you're looking for something light and heartwarming. However, be prepared for a story that feels unfinished and somewhat underdeveloped. While the premise is cute and the characters are endearing, the rushed pacing and lack of depth ultimately hold it back from reaching its full potential. I'd recommend it if you're in the mood for a quick, easy read, but don't expect a deeply engaging or memorable experience.