A Mage Girl Expelled From a Hero Party Becomes The Mother of Twin Elves and The Strongest Mother Eve Novel Review
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By shinya kazama, 風間 シンヤ
125 chapters
2019
Description
Saya Feeligal, a mage girl who gets nauseous at the sight of blood, is finally fired by Gilius the Hero of the Blazing Fire for using only supportive magic, despite being a mage, and is at a loss to return to her hometown. Saya is at her wits’ end, unable to return to her hometown, when she suddenly finds smoke rising from a remote location and rushes to the Elven Village, where she has been a part of before, to find that the Stampede, a group of demons attacking the Elven Village, has killed all the resident elves, and she is now the only one who can help her out. Saya searches for the surviving elves, desperately trying to endure the smell and sight of the sweltering blood. Then one of the female elves approached Saya and entrusted her with her own twin daughters. Saya was saddened and despairing at her inability to save any of them in the end, but when she saw the twin elves entrusted to her, she “I need to get a grip …… I …… have to be a great mother who also protects these girls…’ …! That determination awakens her unique skill, ‘ Mother’, which makes her the most powerful mother she can be. ……
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Publication Information
- Original Publisher
- kakuyomu
- Original Language
- japanese
- Type
- Web Novel
A Mage Girl Expelled From a Hero Party Becomes The Mother of Twin Elves and The Strongest Mother Eve Review & Spoilers - Novel Translator
My Thoughts on A Mage Girl Expelled From a Hero Party Becomes The Mother of Twin Elves and The Strongest Mother Eve
This title is certainly a mouthful, but did the story deliver? Let's dive in.
First Impressions
Okay, so the premise is a bit tropey: mage gets kicked out of the hero's party. We've seen it before. But the addition of the twin elves and the "strongest mother" angle definitely piqued my interest. I went in hoping for a heartwarming story with some action, and the early chapters started off promising.
What Works Well
The initial setup, despite being a little dark, is compelling. The idea of a mage, burdened by a traumatic past, finding purpose in protecting these children is something I can get behind. I felt the author did a decent job setting the stage for a story about found family and overcoming adversity. The unique skill reveal also hints at a potentially interesting power progression system.
Areas of Concern
One thing that bothered me was the pacing. The story felt slow. I wanted things to move along a bit faster, especially in the early chapters. I was hoping for more substantial development. It felt like it was taking a while to get to the core of the story, which is the mage embracing her role as a mother and protector.
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Final Verdict
"A Mage Girl Expelled From a Hero Party Becomes The Mother of Twin Elves and The Strongest Mother Eve" has potential. The premise is interesting, and the idea of a mage overcoming trauma to become a powerful protector is appealing. However, the slow pacing and the initial dark themes might not be for everyone. If you're looking for a heartwarming story with a strong female lead and don't mind a bit of a slow burn, this might be worth checking out. I'm cautiously optimistic and hoping the story picks up the pace and delivers on its promises.
