Because My Toilet Turned Into a Dungeon, Taking Care of My Business Has Become too Difficult

My Thoughts on Because My Toilet Turned Into a Dungeon, Taking Care of My Business Has Become too Difficult

Okay, let's dive into this one. "Because My Toilet Turned Into a Dungeon, Taking Care of My Business Has Become too Difficult" – the title alone pretty much tells you exactly what you're in for. It's a wild ride, that's for sure.

First Impressions

My initial reaction was definitely a raised eyebrow followed by a chuckle. The premise is so absurd that I couldn't help but be intrigued. It's one of those stories where you know going in that you shouldn't take it seriously, and honestly, that's part of its charm. The first chapter immediately throws you into the chaos, and you quickly understand the MC's… predicament.

What Works Well

The comedic aspect is definitely the strongest point. The story embraces its ridiculousness, and the author clearly isn't afraid to lean into the cringe. I found myself laughing at the sheer absurdity of the situations the protagonist finds herself in. It's a fun, lighthearted read that doesn't demand too much of your attention. The pacing is great, especially considering it's a one-shot, and it delivers exactly what the title promises: a girl battling dungeon monsters to use her toilet. The determined protagonist is also a plus. Despite the bizarre circumstances, she faces her challenges head-on, which adds to the comedic effect.

Areas of Concern

The biggest question I had while reading, and it seems like some other readers felt the same way, was: why doesn't she just use a different toilet? It's a valid point, and the story doesn't really offer a solid explanation. This can be a bit frustrating for some, as it feels like a glaring oversight that detracts from the overall experience. If you're someone who needs logical consistency in your stories, this might be a sticking point for you.

Final Verdict

Overall, "Because My Toilet Turned Into a Dungeon, Taking Care of My Business Has Become too Difficult" is a fun, albeit bizarre, one-shot that's perfect for a quick laugh. If you're looking for a serious, thought-provoking story, this isn't it. But if you're in the mood for something completely ridiculous and don't mind suspending your disbelief, then I'd say give it a try. Just don't expect any profound insights or deep character development. It's pure, unadulterated comedic chaos, and sometimes, that's exactly what you need.