A Beautiful Girl Confessed Her Love to Me as a Punishment Game, but After We Started Dating, She Started Getting More and More Obsessive Novel Review
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By 破滅
29 chapters
2024
Description
“You lost, Kirino! Now you have to confess to the guy you most want to date in the class!” This was the punishment game given to the class’s number one beauty, Kiryu Kirino. In our class, there’s a perfect guy named Tetsu Fujisaki. He’s handsome, comes from a wealthy family, has excellent grades, and is the ace of the sports club. Both of them belong to the same group, and I, an introverted guy who usually reads light novels in the corner of the classroom, assumed this was just a push to get these two who were likely mutually interested to confess to each other. However, the person Kiryu-san confessed to wasn’t Fujisaki-kun—it was me, the introverted nobody. In front of everyone, I couldn’t bring myself to reject Kiryu-san and embarrass her, so I went along with it, thinking she’d break up with me at some convenient moment… “Um, don’t you think it’s about time we break up?” “Why would you say that? Don’t joke around about something like that.” “But we only started dating because of the punishment game.” “I like you. I’ll do whatever you want, so please don’t leave me.” This is…getting really intense.
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Publication Information
- Original Publisher
- kakuyomu
- Original Language
- japanese
- Type
- Web Novel
A Beautiful Girl Confessed Her Love to Me as a Punishment Game, but After We Started Dating, She Started Getting More and More Obsessive Review & Spoilers - Novel Translator
My Thoughts on A Beautiful Girl Confessed Her Love to Me as a Punishment Game, but After We Started Dating, She Started Getting More and More Obsessive
This title definitely grabbed my attention, and I went in hoping for a fun, quirky rom-com with a touch of yandere spice. However, after reading a bit and seeing what other readers thought, I'm left with mixed feelings.
First Impressions
The premise is undeniably intriguing: a beautiful girl confesses as part of a dare, and things escalate from there. It's a setup ripe for comedic misunderstandings and obsessive romance. I was initially hooked by the potential for a lighthearted yet slightly dark story.
What Works Well
The core concept of a "punishment game" confession turning into something real is promising. The "clingy lover" and "devoted love interest" tags suggest the female lead has some compelling qualities, and the initial chapters seemed to establish a foundation for an interesting dynamic.
Areas of Concern
My biggest concern stems from the portrayal of the male protagonist. It seems the author spends a disproportionate amount of time dwelling on his social anxiety and lack of confidence. While a cowardly protagonist can be relatable, several readers felt it was taken to an extreme, dominating the narrative to the point of frustration. Apparently, his internal monologues and reactions to social situations become repetitive and detract from the overall plot progression.
Another issue seems to be the pacing and focus. Some readers mentioned the story gets bogged down in unnecessary details, hindering the plot's forward momentum. The initial promise of an engaging plot fades as the author seemingly loses focus, prioritizing mundane descriptions over meaningful plot developments.
Final Verdict
"A Beautiful Girl Confessed Her Love to Me as a Punishment Game, but After We Started Dating, She Started Getting More and More Obsessive" has an interesting premise that unfortunately seems to stumble in its execution. While the initial chapters might draw you in, the overemphasis on the protagonist's flaws and the slow pacing could lead to frustration. If you enjoy slice-of-life with a heavy focus on character introspection, this might be your cup of tea. However, if you're looking for a fast-paced, plot-driven rom-com, you might want to proceed with caution.