After My Childhood Friends Fiancé Was Taken Away, and I Was Subsequently Banished Along With the Saints Stepsister, I Decided to Watch as Those Who Betrayed Me Meet Their Downfall Novel Review
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By サドガワイツキ
24
2023
Description
The fiancé of my childhood friend was stolen away, And my stepsister, whom I had admired since childhood, had her engagement unreasonably broken off and was declared banished. In shock, along with my stepsister who regressed to an infantile state, we were expelled from our homeland. The country that exiled us is now falling apart. Meanwhile, we’re living comfortably in our place of exile, so please hurry up and perish.
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Publication Information
- Original Publisher
- kakuyomu
- Original Language
- japanese
- Type
- Web Novel
After My Childhood Friends Fiancé Was Taken Away, and I Was Subsequently Banished Along With the Saints Stepsister, I Decided to Watch as Those Who Betrayed Me Meet Their Downfall Review & Spoilers - Novel Translator
My Thoughts on After My Childhood Friends Fiancé Was Taken Away, and I Was Subsequently Banished Along With the Saints Stepsister, I Decided to Watch as Those Who Betrayed Me Meet Their Downfall
Okay, that title is a mouthful, isn't it? I dove into this novel with a healthy dose of skepticism, given the sheer length of the title and the… specific premise. Let's just say my expectations weren't sky-high.
First Impressions
The initial setup is classic betrayal fare: a protagonist wronged, a kingdom seemingly gone mad, and a promise of eventual comeuppance. I was ready for a fun revenge story, but I quickly found myself struggling to connect with the narrative.
What Works Well
Honestly, finding positives was a bit of a challenge. The idea of a kingdom regretting its rash decisions is intriguing, and the inclusion of elements like dragon riders and spirits hints at a potentially rich world. However, the execution… well, that's where things get dicey.
Areas of Concern
My biggest issue, and one I suspect many readers share, is the characterization. The MC’s decisions often felt baffling. The idea of willingly exiling himself, despite possessing the power to enact change, struck me as odd. It’s hard to root for a protagonist who seems to actively contribute to his own misfortune.
The intelligence of the surrounding characters also feels questionable. The fact that the kingdom's ruling class so easily falls prey to an obvious villain, and then seems surprised when things go south, strains credulity. It makes it difficult to invest in the world or feel any satisfaction in their inevitable downfall.
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Final Verdict
Ultimately, After My Childhood Friends Fiancé Was Taken Away, and I Was Subsequently Banished Along With the Saints Stepsister, I Decided to Watch as Those Who Betrayed Me Meet Their Downfall falls short of its potential. While the premise offers a glimmer of hope for a satisfying revenge tale, the execution, particularly in terms of character motivations and world-building consistency, leaves much to be desired. I'm giving it a pass for now, but I'll keep an eye out in case it manages to turn things around.
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